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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Monday, 6 August 2018

My near death experience

Today I am going to be telling the story of my near death experience. So this story begins in Hawaii one day my family decided to go the beach it was a really hot day.
We were casually just walking to the beach, then we stop at a light there was a car coming and I thought it was parked. (Keep in mind I was 4 years old)  So with my 4 year old brain I just ran past the road thinking the car was parked. As soon as the car beeped my whole body stopped. my dad was speeding towards me and grabbed me in time. The rest of the day we just chilled at the beach.

Morale of the story: Just wait for the fam

Thursday, 17 May 2018

My Fortnite essay




Fortnite Battle Royale

I play Fortnite Battle Royale at least once everyday. The thing I like about this game is how it is open world and you can build.

What is Fortnite? Fortnite is a free-to-play battle royale game developed and published by Epic games. It is a early access video game which means it hasn’t fully been developed yet and is still in development. So far the game has done very good. The update in february 2018 the developers reported they have 3.4 million players.

How well did Fortnite do? Well for starters Fortnite has earned 126 million dollars beating their rival game PUBG, With over 178,000 viewers on twitch and there rival game with 84,000 viewers. While Fortnite is still free on xbox one, ps4, pc, and mobile. PUBG is still charging there fans. $29.99 to buy the game on xbox one, pc, the game has not yet released on ps4.

How do you play Fortnite? Once you start a game in fortnite you load into a place called Spawn Island. After that you hop on the battle bus which will take you above the main island were the war begins. You jump out and land at a location of your choice. After that you find a weapon which will help you knock your enemies down to win the game and get a victory royale. It doesn't sound very exciting but it really is a accomplishment for many people. And it is still doing amazing to this day.

To conclude my writing want to explain how much I enjoyed making this review. My favorite part about writing this is researching the facts about Fortnite.

Wednesday, 27 July 2016

Immersion Assembly Term 3

Immersion Assembly Term 3

Did you know at Pt England we had an immersion assembly? It was also on the first day of term 3.The teachers also did a performance on the stage in the hall.

Mrs Nua and Mrs Garden and also Mr Jacobson were acting like doing a film scene when the best principal of all time named Mr Burt came back


Well the school was on holidays. Team 1,2,3,4,5 teachers. Had to think during the holidays and usually will they pick us a theme. That we have to do for this term.

Of course the best team of all time team 4. Team 4s performance was about Olympic  exposed. It's about I think Russia was banned from performing. In the Olympics because using drugs.

I felt happy at the assembly my favourite part was. When team 5 performed. What I'm looking forward to the most is olympics.

Friday, 27 May 2016

W4T2 Dictogloss

Team leader america.
And the amazing teacher avengers. are fighting a new supervillain. The super villain is as strong as an ox, And as fast as a cheetah. he wears in deep purple cape and a sparkly green face mask to hide the hideous scar. That covers more than half his face. he is a ninja Warrior prowling around in the dark of the night. Often leaving behind his tracing of his one and only weakness... empty kfc bucket.

Today we are doing a Dictogloss. Which means Mrs Moala reads a paragraph and we have to write that paragraph down.The red in my writing means those are the parts that i missed well Mrs Moala was reading.

Friday, 1 April 2016

Camp Blog Comments




Blog URL :  
Write 1-2 sentences (In your OWN words) about something you liked in their blog post.
Write 1-2 sentences describing WHY you liked that part of their post.
Sup Javan hope u had a cool camp getting picked as a leader I enjoyed your performence for concert night.
Because his Performance
Was Cool
Kia Ora Kaharau I like that u said u guys where Farting eww im glad im not in ur tent he he
Because he said him and his tent buddies where farting
Sup Charles cool Work I like that u said u did flips on the trampaline because that was the thing we anyways i enjoyed reading your work
Because he said he did flips and stuff in the hall on a mall tramp
Good Writing Andrew Hope u really enjoyed camp and I like the u enjoyed Watching Hotel Transylvania 2 I enjoyed the movie myself even tho people Ruined it
Because he said he  was watched Hotel Transylvania 2 And I really enjoyed the movie myself
Hi Skye I enjoyed ur writing I like that u said u like cooking Keep it up

From:Josh
Because she said that she liked Cooking and liked Kyaking

Today we had to respond to 5 people who had posted about there camp experience. I am giving credit to the People who let me read there camp writing. so those students are Javan Kaharau Charles Andrew and Skye.

Friday, 18 March 2016

Volcano Narrative: Hook

Did u know that in 1981, in the middle of the Ring of fire, there were 452 volcanoes? Two of the volcanoes were happy together and every time they erupted they got bigger and bigger. And made the eruption Huge so one day they decided to Separate. They both were sad Johnny Erupted because he was angry and nela was sad and got smaller.Then he sang alone every day and day. and nela was under the water hearing him. so one day nela erupted and got bigger and they both sang together everyday.  And they both lived happily ever after.THE END

This Week we are learning about hooks. the hook i used was did u know. The Writing coverd in blue is what I Improved. Enjoy my writing

Walt: hook our audience.