goldimen and the three bears

I have been learning to write complete sentences, add details, and change the beginnings of my sentences

on a summers day there was a boy named Josh this his story.

Josh was playing happily on his swing in the backyard near the woods.  He played outside until a rabbit came out of no where! He chased and chased until he got lost. He figured it out that he was in the middle of no where.  Josh found a house and he knocked on the door but no one answered. He looked through the window but nobody was there. He decided he would climb thru the window because he was feeling hungry. and he spied 3 bowls of porridge on the table. He taste the big bowl but it was too hot so he tasted the medium size bowl but it was all gooey. At last he tasted the baby bowl and it was all yummy! He gobbled it all up. After his breakfast, he went into the lounge and saw 3 chairs. He climbed up into the big one but it was too high so he tried the medium size chair but it was really soft. Luckily the baby chair was just fine. i loved it so i was swinging and swinging and it turned to a disaster. i saw

some stairs and i went up the stairs. and i saw these beds and i tried to get on to the big bed but it was too high. and the medium size one it was too soft and and s the baby one was just fine and i fell asleep so the 3 bears came back home. And daddy bear got crunky

then muma bear said somebody has eaten baby bears porrdige. and they checked the lounge then the two chairs think somebody has been on dads chair and babies chair was broken on the ground and they went up stairs and baby bear saw somebody sleeping a suddenly josh waked up and he jumped out of the window and that was the end of goldimen