Thursday, 31 March 2016

Idea City

Hook Camp


JPEG ImageDid you know? this year we had our annual year ⅚ camp. There were a lot of activities we could of done. like my favorite part was playing in the hall. Because we got to run and jump on to this champline and landed onto high jump mat. I was learning to rollerskate we played basketball. and we got to play ping pong it was fun  

The Hook im going to use is: Question

Friday, 18 March 2016

Volcano Narrative: Hook

Did u know that in 1981, in the middle of the Ring of fire, there were 452 volcanoes? Two of the volcanoes were happy together and every time they erupted they got bigger and bigger. And made the eruption Huge so one day they decided to Separate. They both were sad Johnny Erupted because he was angry and nela was sad and got smaller.Then he sang alone every day and day. and nela was under the water hearing him. so one day nela erupted and got bigger and they both sang together everyday.  And they both lived happily ever after.THE END

This Week we are learning about hooks. the hook i used was did u know. The Writing coverd in blue is what I Improved. Enjoy my writing

Walt: hook our audience.

Wednesday, 9 March 2016

Monday, 7 March 2016

Thursday, 3 March 2016

Jack Jack Attack

Walt: identify the key features of a narrative text.
Walt: use was/were correctly in our writing.
A long long time ago there was a babysitter and a bionic baby. But the babysitter didn't no that. It made few problems like putting half of the house on fire. Shooting lazers and teloporting outta no where. then early in the morning the evil super hero knocked on the door. And carry gave the baby to the evil super hero but she didn't know he was evil.

Tuesday, 1 March 2016

Narrative (Mikes New Car)

Walt: identify the key features of a narrative text
Today we watched a short movie called Mikes new car. He showed James then they hopped in his new car .and then James had a tutu with his car then his car went crazy. He told James to get out and stop touching. things  Link to Video copy the url and paste it