Thursday, 31 March 2016
Hook Camp
Did you know? this year we had our annual year ⅚ camp. There were a lot of activities we could of done. like my favorite part was playing in the hall. Because we got to run and jump on to this champline and landed onto high jump mat. I was learning to rollerskate we played basketball. and we got to play ping pong it was fun
The Hook im going to use is: Question
Wednesday, 30 March 2016
Friday, 18 March 2016
Volcano Narrative: Hook
Did u know that in 1981, in the middle of the Ring of fire, there were 452 volcanoes? Two of the volcanoes were happy together and every time they erupted they got bigger and bigger. And made the eruption Huge so one day they decided to Separate. They both were sad Johnny Erupted because he was angry and nela was sad and got smaller.Then he sang alone every day and day. and nela was under the water hearing him. so one day nela erupted and got bigger and they both sang together everyday. And they both lived happily ever after.THE END
This Week we are learning about hooks. the hook i used was did u know. The Writing coverd in blue is what I Improved. Enjoy my writing
Walt: hook our audience.
This Week we are learning about hooks. the hook i used was did u know. The Writing coverd in blue is what I Improved. Enjoy my writing
Walt: hook our audience.
Tuesday, 15 March 2016
Hooking Your Audience: #1
Walt: hook our audience.
Thursday, 10 March 2016
Wednesday, 9 March 2016
Monday, 7 March 2016
Happy New Year
Walt: understand character reactions in a story.
Thursday, 3 March 2016
Jack Jack Attack
Walt: identify the key features of a narrative text.
Walt: use was/were correctly in our writing.
A long long time ago there was a babysitter and a bionic baby. But the babysitter didn't no that. It made few problems like putting half of the house on fire. Shooting lazers and teloporting outta no where. then early in the morning the evil super hero knocked on the door. And carry gave the baby to the evil super hero but she didn't know he was evil.
Walt: use was/were correctly in our writing.
A long long time ago there was a babysitter and a bionic baby. But the babysitter didn't no that. It made few problems like putting half of the house on fire. Shooting lazers and teloporting outta no where. then early in the morning the evil super hero knocked on the door. And carry gave the baby to the evil super hero but she didn't know he was evil.
Tuesday, 1 March 2016
Narrative (Mikes New Car)
Walt: identify the key features of a narrative text
Today we watched a short movie called Mikes new car. He showed James then they hopped in his new car .and then James had a tutu with his car then his car went crazy. He told James to get out and stop touching. things Link to Video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2mOqWxM5PyY&feature=youtu.be copy the url and paste it
Today we watched a short movie called Mikes new car. He showed James then they hopped in his new car .and then James had a tutu with his car then his car went crazy. He told James to get out and stop touching. things Link to Video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2mOqWxM5PyY&feature=youtu.be copy the url and paste it
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