Wednesday, 12 August 2015

Josh Grass to Glass part 1

Walt: Add detail to the end of sentences.
Milking happens twice a day, Which takes up to 7 to 8 minutes a day to milk. Early in the morning and late in the afternoon. And you can not miss out all they will get sick and have infections.

Now days, milking machines do all the hard work,but in the olden days they used their hands to milk the cows. one cow gives 30 litres a day.

Image from Rosie's World

1 comment:

  1. You have worked at adding detail to some your sentences. Please take care with your sentence beginnings - you have a sentence without a capital, and one that begins with 'and'.


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